I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
HI joshua Thank you for letting be know where hiks bay is cause when raina told me where it is I didnt know where it was so thank you for letting me know:)
Kia Ora Joshua, This is Neha from Room 9. Just letting you know that you should maybe add full stops. While you doing that check for capital letter because it didn't look right when I read it. Keep working hard.
HI joshua Thank you for letting be know where hiks bay is cause when raina told me where it is I didnt know where it was so thank you for letting me know:)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Joshua,
ReplyDeleteThis is Neha from Room 9. Just letting you know that you should maybe add full stops. While you doing that check for capital letter because it didn't look right when I read it. Keep working hard.