I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Joshua its Harrison from paroa school. I really like this because it has nice backgrounds. But i cant read the writing because it kind of matches the background so its really hard to see and read it. So maybe next time you could fix that but it still is really good. By Harrison
Hi Joshua,I'm Emma from Paroa school I enjoyed reading this slide and I liked the background. To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could change the writing and make it easier to read. Keep up the good work.
Hi Joshua, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I like your post about what you did in the week. My favourite part was when you talked about making up your own game and it sounds like your class had lots of fun. Maybe next time you could use a different colour for your writing. Keep up the good work!
Hi Joshua its Harrison from paroa school. I really like this because it has nice backgrounds. But i cant read the writing because it kind of matches the background so its really hard to see and read it. So maybe next time you could fix that but it still is really good. By Harrison
ReplyDeletehi joshua i like the backgrounds and us what you did in class keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Joshua,I'm Emma from Paroa school
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this slide and I liked the background.
To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could change the writing and make it easier to read. Keep up the good work.
hi luke from paroa school maby next time put pictres in it
ReplyDeleteHi Joshua, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I like your post about what you did in the week. My favourite part was when you talked about making up your own game and it sounds like your class had lots of fun. Maybe next time you could use a different colour for your writing. Keep up the good work!
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