I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Joshua, pressure and energy are really interesting ideas in science. Pressure is made when something impedes (gets in the way) of the energy escaping. Your volcano idea is a great example of that! So is shaking a bottle of fizzy drink..and then taking off the top! But what happens if the top can't come off? Wendy Room 3
Hi Joshua,wow I really liked this because i didn't know much about pressure and energy because we haven't done it before in class . Maybe next time you could write a bit more detail. but it is still very good. By Harrison
Malo leiei Joshua This is Sione From Rm2, I like the colour green on your background, Its so cool and you shoud add more colour into it, Like change the colours into red, And the outside should be green, Its going to be amazing if you try that, Thank you sharing your amazing work.
Malo lelei Joshua, My name is Ema From your class. The colour, creativity and pictures you added just makes your work eye-catching. I like how you started your sentences in a specific way but maybe next time you should put a fullstop at the end of your sentence. Kai pai.
Hi Joshua, pressure and energy are really interesting ideas in science. Pressure is made when something impedes (gets in the way) of the energy escaping. Your volcano idea is a great example of that! So is shaking a bottle of fizzy drink..and then taking off the top! But what happens if the top can't come off? Wendy Room 3
ReplyDeleteHi Joshua,wow I really liked this because i didn't know much about pressure and energy because we haven't done it before in class . Maybe next time you could write a bit more detail. but it is still very good. By Harrison
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ReplyDeleteThis is Sione From Rm2,
I like the colour green on your background,
Its so cool and you shoud add more colour into it,
Like change the colours into red,
And the outside should be green,
Its going to be amazing if you try that,
Thank you sharing your amazing work.
Kia ora Joshua I like your blog that is about pressuring and what it is about. Next time you could explain what you had to do. Ka pai Joshua. Lailani
ReplyDeleteMalo lelei Joshua,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ema From your class.
The colour, creativity and pictures you added just makes your work eye-catching. I like how you started your sentences in a specific way but maybe next time you should put a fullstop at the end of your sentence.
Kai pai.