I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wonderful effort. If you were add/edit/delete one aspect of the story, what would it be and why? Please remember to post a comment on two others' blogs.
Great job on your work. Your gif work was good. Not only did you add gifs to show your reaction but you also described it. Your writing was very good. Keep up the great job.
Wonderful effort. If you were add/edit/delete one aspect of the story, what would it be and why?
ReplyDeletePlease remember to post a comment on two others' blogs.
This work is magnificent. I love the story and everything about it.
ReplyDeleteHello Joshua! I really like the gifs you put in, I just want to ask if you created them or not?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Joshua,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your work. Your gif work was good. Not only did you add gifs to show your reaction but you also described it. Your writing was very good. Keep up the great job.