I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like your slide show, the first slide is really cool, I can almost hear the roaring wave. hopefully there wouldn't be too big waves if you were going on a one person ocean voyage. You choices for the list of foods you'd bring is pretty good, most things are nice healthy choices and water is an instinctual so it's great of you to've remembered it. Bread and vegetables are nice and healthy and rice/peanuts would say good for a long time. It's great to see you've completed lots of the SLJ activities, I'm looking forward to when you start posting again.
Hey Joshua,
ReplyDeleteI like your slide show, the first slide is really cool, I can almost hear the roaring wave. hopefully there wouldn't be too big waves if you were going on a one person ocean voyage. You choices for the list of foods you'd bring is pretty good, most things are nice healthy choices and water is an instinctual so it's great of you to've remembered it. Bread and vegetables are nice and healthy and rice/peanuts would say good for a long time. It's great to see you've completed lots of the SLJ activities, I'm looking forward to when you start posting again.
Daniel :)